You & I

My attempt at poetry 🙂 :

Ink splattered on white paper
Words scattered everywhere
An entire life story’s worth
Fit in five hundred back to back

Described in vivid words
Painted in colorful glory
Dipped in dull misery

Dead in the mortal realm
Still lives through
The drops that fill the spaces
Lives on in the dreams

The journey that was it all
Was it you or a figment
Of my imagination
Whatever you are, I am
Living vicariously through you


About One Change At A Time

Me - I just want to spread goodness and happiness... one good deed at a time.
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8 Responses to You & I

  1. Hanna Wilbur says:

    I am at lost, cuz I’m a total bonehead in poetry :).

  2. kolembo says:

    Ms. Change Revolution, how about that! It’s a glorious piece, look at you go!

    No really, you should be proud, it’s bold and clear and a lovely read.

    The rest of this comment you can edit so it doesn’t clog up your board.

    You ought to go over to Jingle poetry here; scroll down the page to ‘POETRY POTLUCK’, you’ll come to a list of names and numbers, under which you will find a tab titled; Add Your Link

    It’s good enough to be read and be seen and you must set your poems free.

    Of course you NEVER have to listen to anyone else, just the poem, it will tell you.
    Try them and see, and I was was very delighted with the piece, honestly.

    On, on you Revolutionary, you!

  3. you seem to have a good pen . experiences collected while travelling through life are often subdued when put on paper in the form of words.. you have the right attitude . write only bcos u want to –not just bcos u are good at it.

  4. Jingle says:

    you did well…

    Glad to see you in.
    Happy Potluck!


  5. Jingle says:


    Thanks a lot for your contribution to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I am placing your link to our blogroll within two days, hope to see you share your poetry with us tonight…

    Always, your input is valued…
    Happy Sunday!
    Love, xx

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